College Transfer Essay EXPLAINED!!

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So you got into college but it’s not what you expected!! 💥💥NEW YOUTUBE VIDEO - here’s what you need to know about the college transfer essay! So much could go wrong - you want to show growth but not trash talk your home institution AND still demonstrate the need / want to transfer. 

A MUST watch for my transfer students!!

Here’s the summary - How to Write a College Transfer Essay (BE REMEMBERED!!)// College transfer essay can feel daunting. However, how to write college transfer essay should not. Watch as Dr. Josie breaks down how to write college transfer essay and be remembered. With so much to cover regarding all you have matured and learned in the past year, the transfer essay must delight, engage and intrigue. Transferring to An Ivy League - NYU to Harvard, Advice + Tips is just what we focused on with a student last cycle. From Harvard to Yale and GW, writing a transfer essay for college meant that the student needed to show growth. At Write Your Acceptance, I work with students on how to write a transfer admissions essay that works. Remember that as a transfer student, you have already amassed wisdom and knowledge you are ready to share and you can start by writing an essay to transfer schools that shares how as a community college transfer you will contribute to the school. Community college transfer to university can feel overlooked in the admissions process but the community college transfer to uc, for example, is so popular and so I focus on community college transfer essay because they can help you get admitted.

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Writing About Death and Loss in Your College Essay

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This weekend I conducted a small group workshop and one of the students was a bit reserved, shy...totally paying attention but not vocal like the other students. And, if you know me in an essay workshop whether online or in person, I need to know you're with me. So I took her outside while the others were on an identity scavenger hunt and we chatted about where she was in the process.

Issue was - she wanted to write about something super delicate, extremely personal and she wasn't sure it was the right call since she couldn't even share it in our small group.

Today's video I address how to write about the death of a loved one or another delicate topic and make it work for college admissions. Hope this helps! Happy writing!

WRITING ABOUT DEATH IN COLLEGE ESSAY (AND MAKE IT WORK) // Have you heard to stay away from the 3 D’s when writing your college essay? Avoid the college essay cliches and don't write about Death, Divorce, Drugs. Writing your college essay about death of a father or your college essay about losing a loved one more broadly can be incredibly honest and powerful but your college essay format and outline should be one of strategy detailing growth. Therefore, for every rule, there’s an exception. Stand out with an emotional, unique personal statement and still honor your story and journey. If you have life experience that touches on death and grief, you can make it work for you and remain authentic and craft a college essay for your Common App that stands out. This video will show you how to showcase your strengths so that your college application essay is unique. With over 10 years of experience, this college essay tutor knows that it's all about how you edit your essay. These college essay tips will improve your personal statement which can be the difference between accepted or not. Remember, your personal statement for college is your direct line of communication to the admissions office.

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COLLEGE ESSAY IDEAS (COLLEGE ESSAY PROMPTS THAT WORK BEST FOR YOU)

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COLLEGE ESSAY IDEAS (COLLEGE ESSAY PROMPTS THAT WORK BEST FOR YOU) // Are you applying to college with nothing to write your college essay on? This video will show you how to get the writing flowing, assess the strategic dimensions of identity to be unique and memorable to the admission officers. These college essay writing tips will improve your personal statement which can be the difference between accepted or not. Remember, your personal statement for college is your direct line of communication to the admissions office.

Before writing your admissions essay, learn expert tips for how to master the art of telling your story.

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Writing a Winning Personal Statement

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Whether drafting a personal statement for college, medical school or law school, most students miss the mark. Here's why!!!

In today's video I share the two necessary factors needed for a successful personal statement. Sitting in front of the computer screen ready to write the most important essay of your life can feel like the loneliest, most daunting place. However, with some strategy, knowing what needs to be said where can be the jump start you need. Check out this video for expert tips on how to bring in anecdote and analysis...the secret sauce for a winning personal statement!